作文考試基本常識

小作文快而準(zhǔn)確。大作文慢一點。好一點。
格式頂格寫，段落之間空行。

大作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

審題部分，注意題干，雅思一定是一定范圍內(nèi)展開討論。
觀點部分，不能多（同一段話中first sencend last but not least…）也不能少（翻來覆去老是同一個觀點）。不要舉栗子，舉例子是個人相關(guān)的，不普遍。
用詞部分，為了詞匯多樣性，換了很多不同意思的詞。語言能力要用動詞的靈活和準(zhǔn)確性來體現(xiàn)。

大作文完成的步驟與問題

大作文角度

測試

題目：

The increase in people’s life expectancy means that people have to work older to pay for their retirement. The alternative is to start working at a younger age. Does this alternative have positive or negative effects?

優(yōu)缺點題目注意事項：

1. 開頭段

替換詞：

the increase in people’s life expectancy：

• the improvement of life expectancy
• the increased lifespan
• living longer lives

Work older:

• prolong working lives
• work in the old age
• delay retirement
• postpone retirement

Pay for their retirement:

• cover the cost of retirement
• cover basic needs in the old age
• cover expenses in later life

Working at a younger age:

• embark on career early
• enter the workforce early

開頭段范例：

Instead of delaying retirement, some people today consider the option of entering the workforce early in order to save sufficient money for expenses in later life. I would argue that the problems of this strategy outweigh its advantage.

重復(fù)題目，并亮明觀點。

2. 主體段一

A 提前工作 B知識不夠 C 收入不高
背景：現(xiàn)在的社會經(jīng)濟從體力工作轉(zhuǎn)移到腦力工作
背景：腦力工作需要文憑
解釋：倉促進入職場最后只能做體力活
解釋：體力活的經(jīng)濟價值不高，收入不高
對比：腦力活產(chǎn)生高價值產(chǎn)品，收入高
拓展結(jié)果：提前工作，賺錢也不多

范文：

Leaving school early means that people are not well-equipped to handle high-paying jobs in the workplace. The economic transformation has seen a massive transition from manual work to intellectual jobs, which cannot be performed without an intimate knowledge of theories and technologies related to a specific subject area. People who make a hasty decision to enter the workforce may find themselves end up doing some physical work, such as working on the farm or in the garage. These occupations normally offer a living wage only because the economic value of these jobs is limited compared with those in technological sectors, such as information technology, bioscience and artificial intelligence, which involve the provision of high-value products and services. Because of this, despite long working lives, these people may not be able to earn more money than those who stay at school longer and graduate with qualifications to find work in well-paid industries.

3. 主體段二

A 提前工作 B 做體力活 B 職業(yè)生涯也會比較短
背景：低收入工作的工作環(huán)境不好
解釋：高壓力的環(huán)境可能導(dǎo)致各種健康問題
解釋2：使用各種機器，事故率比較高，職業(yè)可能提前結(jié)束
解釋3：即便60歲還健康，可能也沒有體力去繼續(xù)做這些工作

范文：

Another problem worth mentioning is that the career for people doing some poorly-paid jobs may not last as long as expected. Without a strong academic background, they may have to tolerate unappealing working conditions if they find employment in some fields of work, such as plumbing, construction and manufacturing. They are more prone to some health problems as stressful working settings can cause sleep difficulty, mood swings and high blood pressure, which can take a toll over time. These jobs also entail the operation of machines and devices which can sometimes lead to injuries or even deaths. The logic is that their careers can be abbreviated by some accidents. Even though they can stay healthy until they turn 60, the question remains whether they are still physically capable of undertaking those tasks that require physical strength.

4. 主體段三

A提前工作 B 早點積累經(jīng)驗C 職業(yè)更能成功
范圍：自學(xué)能力很強的人
解釋：總結(jié)自己的問題，尋找信息去增加知識
解釋：實際能力和知識結(jié)合，更加能夠發(fā)展事業(yè)
舉例：有些知名的創(chuàng)業(yè)家就是輟學(xué)也能成功

范文：

On the other hand, for those people who are adept at self-education, embarking on the career as early as possible can be advisable. The capacity to learn differs from person to person, and some autonomous learners may be able to acquire knowledge from various sources beyond a formal educational setting. Starting their work early, they may reflect on the problems they encounter in the workplace and advance their knowledge by finding relevant information online ro in books. With a mix of know-how and practical experience, they can advance their career gradually and manage to achieve successes. This has been supported by numerous examples found in renowned entrepreneurs who rise to prominence despite dropping out of school.

5. 結(jié)束段

In conclusion, for the majority, working from a young age is by no means an effective measure to save money for retirement, although there are some exceptions.

總結(jié)

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